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Armonia APP - Talmon Dawnba UPDATE by lunixesquire Armonia APP - Talmon Dawnba UPDATE by lunixesquire
K, so far it is done! Going to get it looked at and hopefully I can get in ^^
For :iconpkmn-armonia:


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Updated Application! Using the new application from the group, and with that, comes new art for Talmon. =D If the pic itself is hard to see, the pic itself can be found here! lunixesquire.deviantart.com/ar…

Name:
Talmon Dawnba

Age:
17

Gender: Male

Pokémon:
Floatzel

Birthday:
28th of March

Height:
173cm

Weight:
75kg

Nature:
Hasty, he usually rushes into things first without thinking and comes out either happy with what happened, or upset that it wasn't what he expected (Like rushing head long into a assignment and realizing HE WAS NOT PREPARED FOR IT!)

Ability:
Swift-Swim

Hometown:
Canalave City

Personality:
A out-going, free minded Floatzel. Growing up his life mostly with his family, street friends playing basketball and other sports, Talmon is a very casual guy who see's and does things through action more than anything else. He's not afraid to say his opinions, even if they are wrong or right which he'll accept either case. If there is a time he believes something is wrong or right but other's disagree, he will fight back as much as possible, not wanting to give in that easily.

However he has the tendency to say and see things too quickly, and react them too quickly with little preparation or thought. Hence why in this year of Armonia, he failed his exams cause he "thought" he was gona be alright right off the bat, but when the time came he got hit hard. This also includes when talking or doing stuff with students where he follows his own pace too much and leaves others a bit behind.

All in all, very out-going, energetic and bright, but too hasty in situations, which can be both annoying and dangerous in many situations.

History:
Talmon is a free-minded, active Floatzel that has no floating-ring.


Talmon was born in Canalave City in a very average family, his father a simple fisher-men, his mother a gentle, calm but somewhat bossy house-wife, and 2 older brothers, both who has already left the city to work elsewhere.


Talmon at first was planning to take on his father’s work on becoming a fisherman, to go swimming out with the other workers of the city and catch the fish in the sea to sell at the markets. Being the youngest it was something he thought he was meant to do. These ideals changed at the age of 10 when he went on a family vacation to the nearest beach with his entire family and friends. Like all Floatzels and water-type pokemons, they went head first into the ocean, swimming and splashing around like happy puppies in the water…Talmon did not enjoy it. He didn’t enjoy the feeling of water around him as much as his own kind, but instead find out he enjoyed being out in the sun, on the firm ground and run around there. Though he was teased by his brother’s and said thing as how “A Floatzels on land is not gona float for long.” In another word, a Floatzel JUST living on land can only go so far.


Talmon didn’t care for he enjoyed feeling the air and fresh wind around him, no restriction of water around him, but running on his own two legs. Getting rid of the floating-ring and giving it back to his parent (which is something most Floatzel family does, to give their children the float-ring), he moved onto doing sport on land, which lead to him enjoying the sport of Basketball the most. No tools, no racquets or nets but the single basketball, 2 hoops, and the open court to run and play within with little restriction.


However one problem did occur with from, and it was that he had the tendency to rush into things and not follow the rules. Having learnt most sports on the streets and with friends with no coach or rules, his parents saw that Talmon didn’t follow most rules, not just in sports, but sometimes in house-holds and other small things in life. Realizing this was NOT, a good start to Talmon’s life, they decided a good change was needed along with his current one, schooling.


It didn’t take long for Talmon’s parents to find the name Armonia spread out in their city, and was surprised to find it had little trying to make Talmon go, for Talmon found this “Armonia” place a good and in his word, an “O-Some!” place to play sports. With a nod and smile his parents sent in a application form to Armonia, hoping this institution will teach Talmon not just sports, but other important lessons needed to get through life.



Summary characteristic:
Strong-Willed, leading to being someone who doesn't like giving up and not trying. If there's somethings need to be done one way or another, better to go head-first and see what happens, and keep trying. This usually leads to him being one of the most "Annoying" and "Pushy" types.

Hobbies:
- Sports (Mostly basketball)
- Outdoor activity, such as tramping, hiking, camping, etc
- Dancing/Singing
- (More to come)

Moveset:
- Double-Hit, useful in basketball for a good, solid defense in basketball.
- Aqua Jet, a signature move that all Floatzel learns naturally. Can't be helped.
- Surf, he doesn't hate being in water, but still, surf still lets him feel the wind in his face while on the water.
- Double-Team, a handy move to have in basketball when being offensive.

Favourite Berry Flavor:
Sour

House:
Amity

School Schedual:
Mandatory:
Math II
History
Battle
Writing
Science
Health and Sex Ed.

Electives:
Gym
Survival
Music

Fun facts:
- Is quite a morning person.
- Has the tendency to rush into things without doing proper research/preparation.
- Swimming to him is a "meh" unlike other Floatzels
- He's fairly Ambidextrous, being both right and left handed.
- He does not have his Float-ring like all the Floatzels
- Talmon doesn't fight much, but he is fit and has some strength.
- Talmon isn't angered that easily, insults to him directly is easily ignored. Insults to friends he tries and clears, but if gone far he will become somewhat forceful.
- In basketball he excells at dribbling, 3-pointers and trick shots (Behind the back, Fadeaway, etc). Playing basketball on the streets, he does alot of tricky moves. Unfortunately he's yet to manage a slam-dunk.
- After the Exams, Talmon's currently trying a bit harder in studying. He still does sports, but in his spare times he attempts to study.
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:iconkukotte:
kukotte Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
Instant love! x3
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist
xD Thousand thanks!
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:iconkukotte:
kukotte Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
Thousand welcomes XD
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:iconberryeon:
Berryeon Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Congrats on getting in, he's such a cool character! >w< I hope we can RP sometime :3
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist
=) We most certainly can! Talmon needs friends to begin with :iconmingplz:
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:iconberryeon:
Berryeon Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ahaha yay! Would you like to do notes? :3
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist
Sure! It'll be the best since of time zone difference, that or skype both works for me. =)
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:iconberryeon:
Berryeon Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I think I can keep track of notes better for right now. xD Would you like to start or should I? :3
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist
=D Start one if you please! Most note rp's I have to start it :iconmingplz: so it'll be a nice change for meee
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:iconberryeon:
Berryeon Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
sent :3
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:iconsweetkimothy:
sweetkimothy Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Filmographer
Welcome to Armoniaaa! This dude looks really cool. ^^
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist
Thousand thanks Kimothy! :iconlaplz:
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:iconbasicvanilla:
BasicVanilla Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lunix! Welcome to Armonia :DD
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist
Cheers Vanilla =D
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:iconscoiipedes:
ScoIipedes Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIXXXXXXXX
Congrats Dude!
We need to RP dude. Seriously.
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist
WE SHALL! >=D I has my icon up and ready!!
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:iconscoiipedes:
ScoIipedes Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome :iconheplz:
lol im wondering if you remember me from pkmc :iconmingplz:
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist
Hmm...Kinda... =I your pkmc OC I know well, but i forgot your old DA name...
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:iconscoiipedes:
ScoIipedes Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I used to be chipdachimchar X3
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist
=D Ahhh, Im remembering now! didnt know u were in armonia -w-
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:iconscoiipedes:
ScoIipedes Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD I joined during the first opening... I think XDDDDD
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:iconhimeheishi:
HimeHeishi Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Tooooooooolda ya~ AWRIGHT WE NEEDA RP SOMETIME SOON~
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist
:iconepiclaplz: WE SHALL!@
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:iconhimeheishi:
HimeHeishi Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
HAHAAAA!!
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist
HAHAAA!!
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:iconheatheru:
Heatheru Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
Welcome to Armonia, Lunix~~! :3
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist
A million thanks Heathers, and im so happy to see u again! =)
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:iconleafpool12:
leafpool12 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
welcome to armonia!
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist
A million thanks!! :iconlawooplz:
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:iconleafpool12:
leafpool12 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what house you get sorted into?
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist
I think it was... Amity?
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:iconleafpool12:
leafpool12 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cool hope you have fun in the group heh
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist
Will do, and if i dont, I'll make fun things happens :iconheplz: doohohohoho
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:iconleafpool12:
leafpool12 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol this should be intresting heh
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:iconazailiathefox:
Azailiathefox Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Congratz!~
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist
THank you! And thank you for the help also! =D :iconexcitedlaplz:
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:iconazailiathefox:
Azailiathefox Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Your welcome~ :iconletmehugyouplz:
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:iconoranguin:
Oranguin Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome in~ :3 Nice to finally see a Floatzel! X3
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist
!? So when people says "Good to see a Floatzel", they mean my OC is the first one!? =O
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:iconoranguin:
Oranguin Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Far as I can remember, you've got the first Floatzel in Armonia. XD
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist
:thumb352525361: :iconsuperw00tplz: OH YEAH!
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:iconskaia200:
Skaia200 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
Congrats on getting in.
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist
THank youuuu =D I hope to have fun, and also to entertain you all! :iconfatlaplz:
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:iconzephaboo:
Zephaboo Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
Welcome to Armonia! :la:
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist
A thousand thank you!! :iconlawooplz:
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:iconazailiathefox:
Azailiathefox Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow!~ This guys is so cool!~ I love Floatzel~ I am from Armonia, my tudent is Milo Storm, and I saw the request for help on this Application if need be, so here we go.
The application itself looks great!~ No changes needed there that I can see~
In the description, mainly the history, I see just a few spelling errors here and there. Not too bad, but if it was changed, that would be nice~
The history was very pleasant, but lacked, let's see, the actual reason he applied for the school. WHy did he sign up specifically? Correct me of i am wrong, but I thought that his life was going well. Why would he ned to apply for such a prestegious Institute such as this one? Just a suggestion.
Other than that, it's perfect!~ I absolutely love it and hope you get recommended~ Sorry if I was blunt or harsh in this comment, I mean no offense at all. I just want to get more apps in our school, like his lovely guy~ Have a nice day!~
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist
Also..I just did a spell check and I can't find any spelling mistakes... X_x Unless I'm blind, can you point one or two out sorry? ;A;
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:iconazailiathefox:
Azailiathefox Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student General Artist
"house-wide" instead of House-wife in the fisrt paragraph.
In the second, it is mainly grammatical errors, like missing commas, but i saw "fishes" which technically isn't the plural of fish. It's just fish. Kinda like sheep.
"happy-puppies" has no dash.
One of the grammar mistakes I thought was weird was, "he enjoyed feeling the air and fresh air around him". Did you mean wind and fresh air? that would make more sense.
There were a few missing commas more, but that was about the worst of it.
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:iconlunixesquire:
lunixesquire Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist
:iconmingteatimeplz: Thank you sensei!
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:iconazailiathefox:
Azailiathefox Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconmingflailplz: Daw, your welcome!~
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